Dear Jason:

Thank you for our meeting. We value your confidence in our ability to meet your needs. Bill Smith and I especially appreciate your suggestions on how we can serve you better.

WE AGREED TO IMPROVE THESE PROCESSES BY SEPT. 30, 2005:

• End-user sales contracts
• Central office switch replacements
• RFQ design criteria.

TONE TELECOM’S NEXT STEPS

1. I will fax you a timeline and implementation plan on Monday.
2. We will examine processes from a quality perspective to improve our effectiveness; Stephen Grath is already working with us to put a program in place.
3. I will call you next Tuesday to answer any questions you might have about our implementation plan.

ADDITIONAL ACTIONS TONE TELECOM AND ACME ARE CONSIDERING

1. Streamline communication flow among
• Tone Telecom Network Systems’ account teams
• ITP and CPG
• Acme Telecom field sales
• Customer Operations.
2. Provide as much lead time as possible for all participants.
3. Offer timely and firm price quotes.
4. Provide Acme Telecom’s competitive price point or willingness to pay, or define a pricing range. For example, XYZ Bell recently defined a pricing range for vendors when responding to an RFQ.

ENHANCING YOUR VENDOR RELATIONS
We also discussed how Acme Telecom can help vendors create complete and competitive responses. Whenever possible, this involves providing

• clear design criteria
• parameters with priorities defined.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR PARTNERSHIP
Thank you again for your feedback and cooperation. We will continue to improve our effectiveness so that we will be your premier strategic vendor.

Sincerely,

J.P. Weinman
Senior Customer Service Manager
ToneTel Companies, Inc.

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