First of all, the HETP test result prior to column use in W49983A2 was .05 cm., resulting in 198 plates. Between regeneration and WFI rinse, some air was pumped into the headspace between the top frit and resin bed. We tried an HETP test and got unacceptable results (less than 100 plates). We then pumped WFI up through the column as a common method to displace air out through the top column tube. Most of the air was displaced and the column repacked with WFI. Subsequent HETP tests were also unacceptable. We again pumped WFI up through the column to displace an air bubble and when the resin came in contact with the top frit I observed resin passing into the tubing at the immediate column inlet. When I removed the top flow assembly I found the top frit mesh to be broken away from the support piece that it’s molded to explaining why resin was able to pass by the top frit. I replaced the top frit, reslurried the resin and repacked the column. I ran an HETP test with very good results, HETP=0.043 cm. and 230 plates. The bottom frit is intact and no resin has been lost. Since the resin was exposed to the air the column was re-regenerated and then stored. The column is now ready for use in the next batch. I’ve put a diagram of a frit in your mailbox for reference.

Notes

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